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Child obesity 2nd draft Everyone knows child obesity is increasing, right? **__Stats__** (slang) show New Zealand is the 7th __fatties__ countries in the word so we need help with this. So how do we solve this?

How children become obese and why it’s a problem: Children become obese because the fast food and sugar they have makes them addicted and so they want more. But sometimes it’s not the kids fault because some parents have low income and the only thing they can get is fast food and junk food. Child obesity isn’t good for your Childs health because later on in life children can sometimes die from it. What food to give your children and why it’s important: All parents like to cook and get there children’s favourite food but most of this is full of sugar or fast food. But lets face it all children enjoy junk food like pizza, popcorn and burgers however what parents don’t realize is that it can damage your child’s health. You should give you children healthy food like fruit, vegetables or just little snacks that don’t have much sugar in it. Parents need to develop healthy lifestyles for there kids. Other wise if they do get obese they might not want to go to school because they might get teased by other kids. They also might not be able to do much stuff. If your children are obese and it gets really bad they could also die from it.

How to help this: We can all help this by eating healthy so eating fruit and stuff with not much sugar in it and not having takeaways every night like maybe once a week or maybe even once a month. It would also be a great if your child got involved in a sport because it would be fun and a great way for your kids to make friends plus lose weight.

So cut down on the sugar and the takeaways and eat healthy. For kids exercise 60 minuets a day and adults 30 minuets.